Top Notch Prompt Response Advice




Dear VCE 'Encountering Conflict' students,

This is a space for you to practise different forms of writing and responding to set prompts. When you write a piece you will need to indicate whether you are using The Secret River or The Rugmaker to inform your writing. You also need to provide a mini statement of explanation that outlines form, audience, purpose and context.

You will also be expected to read each others' work and use the comments feature and DIIGO (a web tool useful for conferencing) to provide feedback to each other. When conferencing you can comment about what is working well in the piece, areas for improvement and how you can see the prompt and nominated text influencing the piece. Due to this you might need to edit a post you have submitted so label each edit as post 1, post 2, etc.

DIIGO: A COLLABORATIVE WEB TOOL THAT CAN BE USED FOR CONFERENCING EACH OTHERS' WRITING

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Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Conflict can create a legacy of tragedy
Conflict transfers between generations
Conflict started the war
Conflict started fights between the white people and black people, which led to a legacy that continues today
Like the conflict between black people and white people, white having black's as slave still effects currect black people today
War can create tension in relationships we see this in 'The Line' where Martin and Arch can't communicate effectively, and there are boundaries in their communication because of Arch's experiences of war
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